Hello.I watched Adora Svitak speech in writing class in GLPS. Adora Svitak is a girl who thinks that grown-ups have to learn things from children. Her parents were very supportive. They bought her a laptop, and she wrote about 100 short stories in it.She wanted to publish it, but the publisher was not as supportive as her parents.
Taking this opportunity she became to think that adults had to learn from children. For this she had really many reasons. Since there are so many I will explain only one argument. Children have more open minds than adults which make them dream better, and dreams make results. For example, when adults dream they are concerned about money and a lot of work to do. When children dream they don't worry about anything, which makes them dream more freely. Grown-ups underestimate kids.They call kids childish because they dream impossible dreams which make improvements on everything. For example, everyone in the village thought that the Wright brothers were insane to imagine such an impossible thing. But they succeeded. Like what Adora Svitak said I believe that adults have to learn from children. Don't rebut me that adults have more experiences so children have to learn from adults because we, children, are already learning from adults.
In conclusion, I think teachers can't command us to do this or that.
FINAL ESSAY ASSIGNMENT
12년 전
Your writing is very clear on this topic. Please be careful about simple errors (spelling, especially).
답글삭제Your last sentence doesn't really fit with the rest of your essay.